I finally made a rough rewrite of the chapter 12 and epilogue scripts, and I was able to knock out a ton of pointless pages... I basically just eliminated anything that was too explainy, so I'm trusting you guys to be able to follow me. As of right now, I've gone from having 53 pages left to draw to around 33, depending on how the pacing really plays out.
I just wanted to let you know, I've been following your comic for a long time, and I really love. You do have the confusing parts, but hey, writing gets better with time and practice, and your art is great, no matter what you say XD