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Ensanguine 1x01by *Time-Giver

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First actual comic, gahhhh! Featuring a congregation of bad fathers... and pre-creep stache Seva.

Lemme know what you guys think about the new format. The white borders have kinda grown on me, they feel a lot more professional.

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TWC: Probably some sketches, whatever I finish before this goes up, haha.

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~ChickenKai Mar 13, 2013

Extra points shall be given for dialogue! After bit watching older works gotta also admit the improvement has been astonishing! Borders are nice and suit well, just keep on track the colors which lie near the border.

~Zavur Feb 27, 2013 Student General Artist

It's really, really beautiful. I can see where DemonLog is coming from, the speech bubbles might become confusing at some points but I think if you keep an eye on it, it'd be fine. I dig this new format.

~DemonLog Feb 26, 2013 Hobbyist

I think the white boarders give your comic a unique aestheticism, and cause the reader to have a feeling of continuity. Without boarder lines to define where each panel is, it's more difficult to pinpoint "this event is happening in this panel", and instead causes a flow. Though the white boarders work well for this page, I can easily see where they would become difficult on the reader, such as a page heavy in dialogue since the speech bubbles also don't have boarder lines.

So as far as flow, the white boarders help the reader simply glide through the comic, but they also make it difficult to simply assess and take in the art, itself.

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